The Asymptote

How do you say what you mean?

Editorial thought partnership for writers whose ideas outrun their drafts — essays, manuscripts, talks, and applications. Let me help you close the distance.

Method

Excavation before markup.

You can feel the vibe of what you're thinking, but you're convinced there's no way to give that vibe a shape. That concretization is where I can help most. I ask the questions that identify the roots of your ideas so that we can give them structure and punch.

Every engagement starts with diagnosis: a memo on what the piece is doing, what it wants to do, and the distance between the two. How we dialogue from there is up to you: in writing, by call, or even in person. Only once we share a vision do we get involved in revision and rehaul, line work, and polishing.

For some clients, I can also hold the pen on your behalf. After enough excavation, I write the first draft in your voice, and you steer us in the refinement. The authorship stays yours; I only ever put on the page what our dialogue surfaced.

I'm someone engaged in writing about the hard work of thinking and knowing, so I can meet your argument on the merits, not just its grammar. I welcome a challenge.

Services & Fees
Ongoing — monthly
Thought partnership (inc. ghostwriting)
I spend the time and effort to grasp how you reason, how you argue, and how you write. You tell me about what it is your brain needs to put out into the world so that I can help bring it into reality — nothing goes on the page that didn't surface in our dialogue.
from $3,500/mo
Editorial thought partnership
Ongoing essay development, talk preparation, and argument work. You draft; I excavate, diagnose, and develop alongside you.
from $2,500/mo
Monthly coaching
Two calls a month and feedback on pages as you produce them, within an agreed scope.
from $850/mo
One-off engagements
Essay & long-form memo
Diagnostic memo on a piece up to ~6,000 words, with an optional call.
$450–600
Graduate application & fellowship review
Statements and essays, one revision pass. Rush available, because deadlines are always on fire.
$600–900
Talk development
Excavation call, outline memo, and one pass on the draft.
$600–800
Manuscript evaluation
A full diagnostic memo on a complete manuscript, priced to length.
from $1,800

Single pieces are the best opportunity for us to find out whether we think well together; afterwards, most one-off clients move into monthly work. Engagements begin with a 50% deposit.

College applications
College essay coaching
For high-school applicants: excavation calls to surface your story, then editorial passes during drafting. Can include supplemental statements. Parents welcome at the first call or to discuss logistics, but the student should take the reins for the drafting calls.
from $1,500
Personal statement review
One diagnostic pass and a call on a single essay. For the draft that's technically finished, but you're unsure for any number of reasons ("something feels off," "I've read this too many times to know what to think anymore," etc.).
$250–350

Baseline coaching covers the primary personal statement. We start with a diagnostic call based on your existing draft (if any), then two to three shaping calls to confirm the premise and find your voice as you draft, then editorial rounds (up to three) once a solidly fleshed-out draft exists. Supplementals and additional rounds extend from there. Calls are generally an hour long, though this depends on your participation.

Engagements begin with a 50% deposit.

Evidence
Exhibit I

A feedback memo

Developmental diagnosis of a nonfiction manuscript on AI and democratic governance. Shared with the author's permission; identifying details removed.

Read the memo →
Exhibit II

A client letter

What the working conversation actually sounds like.

Read the letter →
Exhibit III

My own writing

Lives at 43 Arcseconds — on trust collapse and the epistemics of knowing anything at all.

Read "Knowing Everything and Nothing" (PDF) →
Visit 43 Arcseconds →
Contact

Tell me what's stuck.

Not sure what to write? Answer these and the email writes itself.

What are you writing?
Where does it currently live?
What's the stuck part?
Imprecision welcome. Locating the precise version is my job, not yours.
What's it for? (optional)
Open this in your email app Forms not your thing? Just write to hello@theasymptote.co.